| Judge's Name | Competitor Business Name | Score for CONTENT | Score for PREPAREDNESS | Score for PITCH SKILLS | Score for COMPETITIVE ADVANTAGE AND POTENTIAL for GROWTH (SWOT analysis) | Score for OVERALL CONCEPT | Score for COMMUNITY & TARGET MARKET | Total Score | NOTES AND OBSERVATIONS |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| Breonna Kellogg | NorthStar biPOC Wellness Ctr, LLC | 4 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 23 | Great introduction. Handout had great paper quality. The HUD has a monthly meeting that is great to be apart of to listen to other resources you can use and add your business as a referral source. I believe OPPD is now leading the meeting. Please make sure to add all 3 year financial projections; add like sales, sales per price, Cost of good, revenue and etc. |
| Breonna Kellogg | HOPE HEALS LLC | 4 | 3 | 4 | 3 | 3 | 3 | 20 | Great introduction. Bring handouts like your brochures. Make sure to shorten your pitch to be 5 minutes. Also talk about how your paid from your payor sources for example you get paid a certain amount hourly or etc. Contact NBDC for financial projections. |
| Breonna Kellogg | Patron Senior Living LLC | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 23 | Great introduction. Work on adding more financial into your projections. |
| Breonna Kellogg | AFROMAHA LLC | 5 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 24 | You moved really fast with switching the slides, hard to see the slides. When presenting keep eye contact with minimal times looking at the slides. Break down your financials. |
| Breonna Kellogg | Sensiil Studios | 4 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 25 | Great introduction. |
| Breonna Kellogg | Nebraska Innovation Labs | 5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 25 | Great introduction. Try to make sure all your information fits on the slide. |
| Breonna Kellogg | Abundant Faith N Joy | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 25 | Great teamwork. Make sure to give products to judges before starting pitch. Smile and own the space. Awesome job. |
| Breonna Kellogg | Gamble Tech Firm | 4 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 24 | Great introduction. Slow down and allow us to see the slide. Try not to turn your back against judges. |
| Breonna Kellogg | Still Poppin Gourmet Popcorn | 5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 25 | Great introduction. Grow Nebraska can help with making labels and nutrition labels. |
| Breonna Kellogg | D ATKINS ENTERPRISES LLC DBA GIMME THE SCOOP | 5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 25 | Introduce yourselves. Try to memorize your pitch and have your backs to the judges. Thank you for samples. |
| Candice Price | Patron Senior Living LLC | 4 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 25 | Good job adding in a few additional details for the financials. Remember to find out what your break even point will be for profit and begin build in your salary |
| Candice Price | AFROMAHA LLC | 5 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 26 | Vast improvement from initial virtual pitch |
| Candice Price | Sensiil Studios | 5 | 5 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 5 | 29 | Good job. Consider a bit more enthusiasm as you present, just a bit more energy to your pitch. Sometimes your excitement will help excite the people you are presenting to. Remember you may be the last one to pitch after a judge has sat through several others. |
| Candice Price | Nebraska Innovation Labs | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 24 | Add a bit more clarity to the cost per customer acquisition, as well as the separation of the non-profit and for profit. |
| Candice Price | Abundant Faith N Joy | 5 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 27 | You and the girl did an exceptional job today! Do not be afraid to grow! |
| Candice Price | Gamble Tech Firm | 5 | 4 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 27 | Excellent and exciting concept. Looking forward to seeing it's growth. Consider additional options for revenue opportunities, including minimal costs to mentees. |
| Candice Price | Still Poppin Gourmet Popcorn | 5 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 26 | Adjust financial slide for easy readability, possibly just go back a few years on the slide instead of the beginning in 2017. You can speak to the beginning years, but maybe just show a few for a larger graphic. Don't be afraid to ask for help when and where needed, and don't be afraid to GROW!!! |
| Fatou Sogoyou | Patron Senior Living LLC | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 24 | Great composure, sound knowledgeable and passionate. Look into projections some more, break even point etc... master your financial in and out, add more details for possibility of growth... slow down during presentation |
| Fatou Sogoyou | HOPE HEALS LLC | 4 | 3 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 22 | Good confidence, great job with the deck, nice projections but will need to elaborate on the financial How do you scale? How do we ensure we keep customers or get more customers? How do you stay profitable? What are some blockers you anticipated? |
| Fatou Sogoyou | AFROMAHA LLC | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 24 | Great presentation, nice slides, would like to see more details on the revenue model, add in vendors stream of income not just sponsor and tickets... break down the different type - food, service based, connectors etc... impact on the community etc? Presenter could slow down a little bit.... Presenter could prepare more and provide more details on financial, at times had trouble providing numbers when judge asked questions... also expansion is good but focus on your WHY! Good job overall. |
| Fatou Sogoyou | Sensiil Studios | 4 | 4 | 5 | 4 | 5 | 5 | 27 | Remote was a little tougher but great presentation, on point, vision is clear, show a good understanding of the business and the plan Would like to know more about financial, revenue model, talk a little more about the different stream of income, additional vertical to think about merchandise, subscription based, on screen parternship etc... |
| Fatou Sogoyou | Nebraska Innovation Labs | 3 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 22 | Clarify non profit comment - confused judges Clarify the cost of acquisition - 13k is high , how many customers are you averaging Improve the slides - title, legend as needed etc |
| Fatou Sogoyou | Abundant Faith N Joy | 5 | 5 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 27 | Great presentation, great way to incorporate past feedback Talk more about the growth, how to scale, be more open to business Love your details about what you need the 15k for and how you can turn that into 27k etc Would like to see more on financial projections and also the different quality of your products... for example Gildan price is different compare to canvas |
| Fatou Sogoyou | Gamble Tech Firm | 4 | 4 | 4 | 3 | 4 | 4 | 23 | Good presentation, love the intro Would like to hear more about financials, projections... Customer retention rate is important - think about that Talk more about App development, maintenance, feature requests improvements |
| Fatou Sogoyou | Still Poppin Gourmet Popcorn | 4 | 5 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 4 | 25 | Good presentation, love the subscription approach, elaborate more on the different stream of income Would like to hear more about growth, pop ups, conference, family event is great but how do you scale? Work on marketing, adding nutrients fact on packaging, brand awareness Observations: Too many words, spell check the pitch deck, add more pictures maybe |
| Judge's Name | Competitor Business Name | Score for CONTENT | Score for PREPAREDNESS | Score for PITCH SKILLS | Score for COMPETITIVE ADVANTAGE AND POTENTIAL for GROWTH (SWOT analysis) | Score for OVERALL CONCEPT | Score for COMMUNITY & TARGET MARKET | Total Score | NOTES AND OBSERVATIONS |
