I loved the storytelling at the beginning, that was so great. Explaining your revenue streams was well done and easy to follow - I also liked the idea for the future revenue opportunities A small suggestion, don't say that you "only" have X amount of dollars in revenue, be proud of what you have done. Especially for the first couple of years. Everyone gets started someone. The company revenue slide had some confusing information with the direct to consumer, wholesale, and fundraising percentages. I thought that was a breakdown of revenue, but I think it is actually your COGS.