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| Judge's Name | Competitor Business Name | Scoring Categories | 1. CONTENT (Business Nature and Industry) | Score for CONTENT | 2. PREPAREDNESS (Research and work put in) | Score for PREPAREDNESS | 3. PITCH SKILLS (Persuasion and time delivery) | Score for PITCH SKILLS | 4. COMPETITIVE ADVANTAGE AND POTENTIAL for GROWTH (SWOT analysis) | Score for COMPETITIVE ADVANTAGE AND POTENTIAL for GROWTH (SWOT analysis) | 5. OVERALL CONCEPT (Business concept, creativity, innovation and vision) | Score for OVERALL CONCEPT | 6. COMMUNITY & TARGET MARKET (Market size and social impact) | Score for COMMUNITY & TARGET MARKET | Total Score | NOTES AND OBSERVATIONS |
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| Frank Hayes | Gamble Tech Firm | (ADEQUATE) - Shows an adequate understanding | 3 | (GOOD) - Seems pretty prepared but might have used some additional planning | 4 | (GOOD) - Shows enthusiasm and creativity. Could be more clear and concise | 4 | (GOOD) - Shows a good understanding of why their business is unique and how it will stand out from their competitors | 4 | (GOOD) - Describes most details about overall concept and vision and concept is original and innovative | 4 | (GOOD) - Product or service is described and includes some details about the consumer audience | 4 | 23 | ||
| Craig Korkow | Gamble Tech Firm | (ADEQUATE) - Shows an adequate understanding | 3 | (GOOD) - Seems pretty prepared but might have used some additional planning | 4 | (GOOD) - Shows enthusiasm and creativity. Could be more clear and concise | 4 | (GOOD) - Shows a good understanding of why their business is unique and how it will stand out from their competitors | 4 | (ADEQUATE) - Describes parts of the overall concept and vision and idea is somewhat innovative | 3 | (GOOD) - Product or service is described and includes some details about the consumer audience | 4 | 22 | ||
| Rahul Agarwal | Gamble Tech Firm | (ADEQUATE) - Shows an adequate understanding | 3 | (ADEQUATE) - Fairly prepared but with some missing parts | 3 | (GOOD) - Shows enthusiasm and creativity. Could be more clear and concise | 4 | (ADEQUATE) - Shows understanding of their business and competitors | 3 | (GOOD) - Describes most details about overall concept and vision and concept is original and innovative | 4 | (GOOD) - Product or service is described and includes some details about the consumer audience | 4 | 21 | presentation was enthusiastic and solid overall, could have better prepared on explaining how to recruit mentors and how to reach significant increase in projected revenue | |
| Daphne Cook | Gamble Tech Firm | (EXCELLENT) - Has ALL important concepts from a business plan to a legitimate business claim | 5 | (EXCELLENT) - Are completely prepared and have put time and planning into their pitch | 5 | (EXCELLENT) - Enthusiastically and creatively delivers a clear and concise pitch | 5 | (GOOD) - Shows a good understanding of why their business is unique and how it will stand out from their competitors | 4 | (GOOD) - Describes most details about overall concept and vision and concept is original and innovative | 4 | (EXCELLENT) - Product of service is clearly described in detail with explanation of production/delivery to the public | 5 | 28 | Unsure why mentors would want to pay to participate. | |
| Allyson Eastman | Gamble Tech Firm | (ADEQUATE) - Shows an adequate understanding | 3 | (GOOD) - Seems pretty prepared but might have used some additional planning | 4 | (EXCELLENT) - Enthusiastically and creatively delivers a clear and concise pitch | 5 | (FAIR) - Shows a fair understanding of why their business is unique but could use more competitive research | 2 | (ADEQUATE) - Describes parts of the overall concept and vision and idea is somewhat innovative | 3 | (GOOD) - Product or service is described and includes some details about the consumer audience | 4 | 21 | ||
| Frank Hayes | Gimme the Scoop | (GOOD) - Shows a good understanding of their business plan and some details | 4 | (GOOD) - Seems pretty prepared but might have used some additional planning | 4 | (GOOD) - Shows enthusiasm and creativity. Could be more clear and concise | 4 | (ADEQUATE) - Shows understanding of their business and competitors | 3 | (ADEQUATE) - Describes parts of the overall concept and vision and idea is somewhat innovative | 3 | (ADEQUATE) - All aspects of the products is not described | 3 | 21 | ||
| Craig Korkow | Gimme the Scoop | (EXCELLENT) - Has ALL important concepts from a business plan to a legitimate business claim | 5 | (GOOD) - Seems pretty prepared but might have used some additional planning | 4 | (GOOD) - Shows enthusiasm and creativity. Could be more clear and concise | 4 | (EXCELLENT) - Clearly explains and understands why their business is unique and how they will stand out from their competitors | 5 | (EXCELLENT) - Overall concept and vision is clearly understood and described in detail and concept is truly unique | 5 | (GOOD) - Product or service is described and includes some details about the consumer audience | 4 | 27 | ||
| Rahul Agarwal | Gimme the Scoop | (GOOD) - Shows a good understanding of their business plan and some details | 4 | (GOOD) - Seems pretty prepared but might have used some additional planning | 4 | (EXCELLENT) - Enthusiastically and creatively delivers a clear and concise pitch | 5 | (GOOD) - Shows a good understanding of why their business is unique and how it will stand out from their competitors | 4 | (GOOD) - Describes most details about overall concept and vision and concept is original and innovative | 4 | (GOOD) - Product or service is described and includes some details about the consumer audience | 4 | 25 | great presentation and very enthusiastic, would have liked to hear more about why they decided to open a storefront and how margins differ between the storefront and the mobile trailer | |
| Daphne Cook | Gimme the Scoop | (GOOD) - Shows a good understanding of their business plan and some details | 4 | (GOOD) - Seems pretty prepared but might have used some additional planning | 4 | (GOOD) - Shows enthusiasm and creativity. Could be more clear and concise | 4 | (GOOD) - Shows a good understanding of why their business is unique and how it will stand out from their competitors | 4 | (GOOD) - Describes most details about overall concept and vision and concept is original and innovative | 4 | (EXCELLENT) - Product of service is clearly described in detail with explanation of production/delivery to the public | 5 | 25 | Love your product. It iseverything you said it was | |
| Allyson Eastman | Gimme the Scoop | (EXCELLENT) - Has ALL important concepts from a business plan to a legitimate business claim | 5 | (EXCELLENT) - Are completely prepared and have put time and planning into their pitch | 5 | (GOOD) - Shows enthusiasm and creativity. Could be more clear and concise | 4 | (GOOD) - Shows a good understanding of why their business is unique and how it will stand out from their competitors | 4 | (ADEQUATE) - Describes parts of the overall concept and vision and idea is somewhat innovative | 3 | (GOOD) - Product or service is described and includes some details about the consumer audience | 4 | 25 | ||
| Frank Hayes | Patron Senior Living LLC | (ADEQUATE) - Shows an adequate understanding | 3 | (ADEQUATE) - Fairly prepared but with some missing parts | 3 | (EXCELLENT) - Enthusiastically and creatively delivers a clear and concise pitch | 5 | (ADEQUATE) - Shows understanding of their business and competitors | 3 | (ADEQUATE) - Describes parts of the overall concept and vision and idea is somewhat innovative | 3 | (ADEQUATE) - All aspects of the products is not described | 3 | 20 | ||
| Craig Korkow | Patron Senior Living LLC | (GOOD) - Shows a good understanding of their business plan and some details | 4 | (GOOD) - Seems pretty prepared but might have used some additional planning | 4 | (EXCELLENT) - Enthusiastically and creatively delivers a clear and concise pitch | 5 | (ADEQUATE) - Shows understanding of their business and competitors | 3 | (GOOD) - Describes most details about overall concept and vision and concept is original and innovative | 4 | (EXCELLENT) - Product of service is clearly described in detail with explanation of production/delivery to the public | 5 | 25 | ||
| Rahul Agarwal | Patron Senior Living LLC | (ADEQUATE) - Shows an adequate understanding | 3 | (GOOD) - Seems pretty prepared but might have used some additional planning | 4 | (GOOD) - Shows enthusiasm and creativity. Could be more clear and concise | 4 | (ADEQUATE) - Shows understanding of their business and competitors | 3 | (ADEQUATE) - Describes parts of the overall concept and vision and idea is somewhat innovative | 3 | (ADEQUATE) - All aspects of the products is not described | 3 | 20 | presentation was enthusiastic, but he could have better explained his competitive advantages. would have liked to know his payor mix too between insurance and private pay | |
| Daphne Cook | Patron Senior Living LLC | (GOOD) - Shows a good understanding of their business plan and some details | 4 | (GOOD) - Seems pretty prepared but might have used some additional planning | 4 | (GOOD) - Shows enthusiasm and creativity. Could be more clear and concise | 4 | (GOOD) - Shows a good understanding of why their business is unique and how it will stand out from their competitors | 4 | (GOOD) - Describes most details about overall concept and vision and concept is original and innovative | 4 | (GOOD) - Product or service is described and includes some details about the consumer audience | 4 | 24 | Need more clarity of how it differs with other businesses similar to yours. | |
| Allyson Eastman | Patron Senior Living LLC | (GOOD) - Shows a good understanding of their business plan and some details | 4 | (EXCELLENT) - Are completely prepared and have put time and planning into their pitch | 5 | (GOOD) - Shows enthusiasm and creativity. Could be more clear and concise | 4 | (POOR) - Does not identify why their business is unique and how they will stand out from the competitor | 1 | (ADEQUATE) - Describes parts of the overall concept and vision and idea is somewhat innovative | 3 | (EXCELLENT) - Product of service is clearly described in detail with explanation of production/delivery to the public | 5 | 22 | ||
| Frank Hayes | Sensiil Studios | (GOOD) - Shows a good understanding of their business plan and some details | 4 | (EXCELLENT) - Are completely prepared and have put time and planning into their pitch | 5 | (GOOD) - Shows enthusiasm and creativity. Could be more clear and concise | 4 | (GOOD) - Shows a good understanding of why their business is unique and how it will stand out from their competitors | 4 | (GOOD) - Describes most details about overall concept and vision and concept is original and innovative | 4 | (GOOD) - Product or service is described and includes some details about the consumer audience | 4 | 25 | ||
| Rahul Agarwal | Sensiil Studios | (GOOD) - Shows a good understanding of their business plan and some details | 4 | (EXCELLENT) - Are completely prepared and have put time and planning into their pitch | 5 | (GOOD) - Shows enthusiasm and creativity. Could be more clear and concise | 4 | (GOOD) - Shows a good understanding of why their business is unique and how it will stand out from their competitors | 4 | (EXCELLENT) - Overall concept and vision is clearly understood and described in detail and concept is truly unique | 5 | (GOOD) - Product or service is described and includes some details about the consumer audience | 4 | 26 | great presentation overall, could better explain how he intends to scale his artistic/drawing ability | |
| Craig Korkow | Sensiil Studios | (GOOD) - Shows a good understanding of their business plan and some details | 4 | (EXCELLENT) - Are completely prepared and have put time and planning into their pitch | 5 | (EXCELLENT) - Enthusiastically and creatively delivers a clear and concise pitch | 5 | (GOOD) - Shows a good understanding of why their business is unique and how it will stand out from their competitors | 4 | (EXCELLENT) - Overall concept and vision is clearly understood and described in detail and concept is truly unique | 5 | (GOOD) - Product or service is described and includes some details about the consumer audience | 4 | 27 | ||
| Daphne Cook | Sensiil Studios | (GOOD) - Shows a good understanding of their business plan and some details | 4 | (ADEQUATE) - Fairly prepared but with some missing parts | 3 | (GOOD) - Shows enthusiasm and creativity. Could be more clear and concise | 4 | (GOOD) - Shows a good understanding of why their business is unique and how it will stand out from their competitors | 4 | (GOOD) - Describes most details about overall concept and vision and concept is original and innovative | 4 | (GOOD) - Product or service is described and includes some details about the consumer audience | 4 | 23 | ||
| Allyson Eastman | Sensiil Studios | (ADEQUATE) - Shows an adequate understanding | 3 | (EXCELLENT) - Are completely prepared and have put time and planning into their pitch | 5 | (GOOD) - Shows enthusiasm and creativity. Could be more clear and concise | 4 | (ADEQUATE) - Shows understanding of their business and competitors | 3 | (GOOD) - Describes most details about overall concept and vision and concept is original and innovative | 4 | (ADEQUATE) - All aspects of the products is not described | 3 | 22 | ||
| Frank Hayes | Still Poppin Gourmet Popcorn | (GOOD) - Shows a good understanding of their business plan and some details | 4 | (GOOD) - Seems pretty prepared but might have used some additional planning | 4 | (EXCELLENT) - Enthusiastically and creatively delivers a clear and concise pitch | 5 | (GOOD) - Shows a good understanding of why their business is unique and how it will stand out from their competitors | 4 | (ADEQUATE) - Describes parts of the overall concept and vision and idea is somewhat innovative | 3 | (ADEQUATE) - All aspects of the products is not described | 3 | 23 | ||
| Craig Korkow | Still Poppin Gourmet Popcorn | (EXCELLENT) - Has ALL important concepts from a business plan to a legitimate business claim | 5 | (EXCELLENT) - Are completely prepared and have put time and planning into their pitch | 5 | (EXCELLENT) - Enthusiastically and creatively delivers a clear and concise pitch | 5 | (ADEQUATE) - Shows understanding of their business and competitors | 3 | (GOOD) - Describes most details about overall concept and vision and concept is original and innovative | 4 | (GOOD) - Product or service is described and includes some details about the consumer audience | 4 | 26 | ||
| Rahul Agarwal | Still Poppin Gourmet Popcorn | (GOOD) - Shows a good understanding of their business plan and some details | 4 | (GOOD) - Seems pretty prepared but might have used some additional planning | 4 | (GOOD) - Shows enthusiasm and creativity. Could be more clear and concise | 4 | (GOOD) - Shows a good understanding of why their business is unique and how it will stand out from their competitors | 4 | (GOOD) - Describes most details about overall concept and vision and concept is original and innovative | 4 | (GOOD) - Product or service is described and includes some details about the consumer audience | 4 | 24 | enthusiastic presentation that was generally concise, would like more info on how she would transition to working full time to scale in one year | |
| Daphne Cook | Still Poppin Gourmet Popcorn | (EXCELLENT) - Has ALL important concepts from a business plan to a legitimate business claim | 5 | (GOOD) - Seems pretty prepared but might have used some additional planning | 4 | (EXCELLENT) - Enthusiastically and creatively delivers a clear and concise pitch | 5 | (EXCELLENT) - Clearly explains and understands why their business is unique and how they will stand out from their competitors | 5 | (EXCELLENT) - Overall concept and vision is clearly understood and described in detail and concept is truly unique | 5 | (EXCELLENT) - Product of service is clearly described in detail with explanation of production/delivery to the public | 5 | 29 | ||
| Allyson Eastman | Still Poppin Gourmet Popcorn | (EXCELLENT) - Has ALL important concepts from a business plan to a legitimate business claim | 5 | (EXCELLENT) - Are completely prepared and have put time and planning into their pitch | 5 | (EXCELLENT) - Enthusiastically and creatively delivers a clear and concise pitch | 5 | (GOOD) - Shows a good understanding of why their business is unique and how it will stand out from their competitors | 4 | (GOOD) - Describes most details about overall concept and vision and concept is original and innovative | 4 | (ADEQUATE) - All aspects of the products is not described | 3 | 26 | ||
| Judge's Name | Competitor Business Name | Scoring Categories | 1. CONTENT (Business Nature and Industry) | Score for CONTENT | 2. PREPAREDNESS (Research and work put in) | Score for PREPAREDNESS | 3. PITCH SKILLS (Persuasion and time delivery) | Score for PITCH SKILLS | 4. COMPETITIVE ADVANTAGE AND POTENTIAL for GROWTH (SWOT analysis) | Score for COMPETITIVE ADVANTAGE AND POTENTIAL for GROWTH (SWOT analysis) | 5. OVERALL CONCEPT (Business concept, creativity, innovation and vision) | Score for OVERALL CONCEPT | 6. COMMUNITY & TARGET MARKET (Market size and social impact) | Score for COMMUNITY & TARGET MARKET | Total Score | NOTES AND OBSERVATIONS |
